学生们回来后的当天下午或晚上就已经陆续通过GEABC官方网站在线提交作文啦。最早提前的Chris,Michael。Arvin下午六点也提交。但是没有显示出来。他以前他是第一个。其实他的两位同学早已提交。
Michael的作文虽然不太精彩，但是已经比以前的马虎应付习惯相比有很大的改变。至少可以清晰地语法较正确地表达一个活动的前前后后。
Chris说到沙滩的时候We freed our pressure.说到沙滩足球的时候I was a goal keeper.I blocked a lot of balls.We played hard.说到情景剧表演的时候We thought we performed well.说到辩论的时候I thought chatting on QQ was good.Because chatting on QQ is speediest.Using QQ to communicate in my age is trendy.结束总结的时候特别精彩生动This day we were all the friends of sun,sand and ocean.And it's the most unforgettable day of mine!
Tina说到到了海边不能游泳的时候The sea looked so beautiful!But we couldn't swim!What a pity!说到沙滩排球的时候It was so difficult for me because I've never played it.It made my hands hurt.说到情景剧的时候I was the best performer!这是事实。她在此次的表演及整个夏令营中，突破最大。我也感到相当的欣慰。
说到晚上睡觉的时候I slept with Jessica.She told me that I took the quilt away and made her cold.But I didn't know that.
Jessica的作文虽然是使用汉语写的，而且是一回来就花了两个小时在博客上写得，但是形容得相当经典。我们可以在GEABC首届夏令营视频杂志中全文欣赏到。另外，据说，她最近刚获得全国圣陶杯作文大赛三等奖！
Arvin的作文在说到听到消息的时候，使用了描述的手法。We couldn't wait to go to the beach.说到沙滩排球的时候，他描述得很细致Chris,Violet,Jessica,Thomas and I were Team A.Michael,Matthew,Tina,Selena and Miki were Team B.After a firce match,Team A was winner.However,Team B was the loser.说到听到洪老师宣布可以去海边玩的时候We threw the ball and hurried to the sea.However that ball hit a person.Oh!My God!But that person smiled and threw the ball to us."Sorry!God bless you!"说到海边之后I felt very cool when I ran into the sea.And then we noticed lots of hermit crabs in the conches.说到音乐传球游戏的时候，规则写得特别清楚It was about transfer balls.If you lose,you must show your talent.I lost too.So I recited a poem.说到晚餐We had dinner in a four-star hotel.The food was very delicious and fresh.I ate a lot of food.But the girls ate more.I thought it was realy scary.
Violet说到出发的时候关于Thomas的故事说到Everybody was excited especially Thomas.To our surprise,he carried three big bags and told lots of bad jokes on the bus.We felt so cold from departure to destination.What a funny guy!说到到达海边之后We kicked off our shoes quickly.Then I made my feet into the sand.Suddenly I felt the sand was very soft and comfortable like silk cloth.表述沙滩排球的时候，为什么没有参加时说到I only watched volleyball match on TV.So I thought it was difficult.I thought I had to give up.话峰一转说到海As for me,sea was more attractive.I like the sea level that separate the sea and sky.I liked the waves that touched my feet again and again.I also liked the shells that laid on the beach.We played water together and picked something interesting.在这里，我在一边评论的时候，一边在感叹，Violet，my student!Violet!GEABC's student!
说到晚会后的活动，她说到I enjoyed the soft sea breeze and fireworks with Selena and Miki.We took many photos.说到晚上酒店睡觉前的恶作剧I have to say something about hotel.Because this was my first time to sleep without family.Selena and I made a hoax.We knocked the wall such as beating drums.Some minutes later,Michael responded to us at the other side of the wall.We were excited.
提到受影响无法入睡的Charley时，I knew that must be our hoax.Selena was the mastermind and I was the accopmlice.
结尾更经典，有相当的号召力I hope everybody will be powerful and GEABC will be powerful!
Miki的作文涉及到一首暑假Charley教过他们的歌曲。让我印象特别深刻。她在夏天营开始前，是所有学生中准备得最认真的。提到准备的环节时I think it can improve mour teamwork.And teamwork is important for us.她也是相当有团队精神的。在上一年暑假的情景剧中，她作为组长，在组织方面就表现相当突出。说到晚会结束的后,The sea in the evening was very beautiful.It looked like a sleeping beauty!Many stars were in the sky and it reminded me of a song that we learned a week ago,”Starry starry night…”And I smelt the taste of the sea.I made me very comfortable.说到夏令营结束Although the trip is over,our joy still continue.文章结束也是相当感人并有相当的号召力Come on!Everyone!Don’t wait any more!Let’s enjoy learning English!
Selena的作文一开头就说How happy we are!到达之后The burning sun was above,but after a few minutes the sun was hiding behind the clouds.说到秋千I enjoyed playing on a swing.It was interesting and easy to play.说到喜欢的东西I also liked wind that came from the sea.I felt cool and fresh!说到海边捉蟹时I caught many hermit crabs and put them into the bottle.The tour guide told us “the hermit crab will die if you keep them in the bottle.They should live in the sea.That is their home.”Then Miki andI decided to let them return to the sea.So we asked Emma to do this meaningful thing.说到晚餐是Miki海鲜过敏的事情The food was delicious.But it was a pity for Miki.Why?She was allergic to seafood.
