这是我迄今为止看到过的最好的自传或自述。对于一个九年级的学生来说，水平相当高。同样地，她运用了大量的较为准确的词汇来表达各种细腻的意思或感情。大量的从句与复合结构。多种时态并用。
我一直觉得自己很幸运，能有这样的学生。
2010年的内部杂志与优秀作文选将是相当有份量的。这个寒假，这个中考班，这位学生，注定是要写入GEABC的历史的。
The story about myself.
Perhaps，you don't know Selena clearly.But I think that I really realize(引处使用此词并不合适。用know更合适) her.She often makes some jokes and makes people happy.
Oh…I forget to tell her sex to you.She is a girl but sometimes she is similar to (a)boy.Because I think she is as crazy as (a)boy. And she is full of energy. She likes to talk everything that she wants to say.And some people would think she is talkative .
Talkative…I think this word is a commendatory( 赞赏的)term not derogatory（贬义的）term. But this is my own opinion. What do you think(think of) this？
Now, I think I should tell something about Selena to you .Would you want to know?Let me tell you ！
One day, the New Year would come(was coming). So Selena would say (was going to say)“Happy New Year!”to other person.But the problem was that when she said blessing by making message to Mr.Hong who is teaching her English.She wrote “Happy New York!” instead of “ Happy New Year!” This was very interesting,and all the students including Mr.Hong were laughting (laughing)(laughed直接使用过去时态最好)loudly. How embarrassed she is（was）!
She is lazy.She often complains about too much homework or (加入引导词that)the teachers are strict.But (However,)she knows that—It’s her duty to study hard.
She has her own dream and she knows she must to (去掉to)try hard.She likes a very classical saying“Never give up!”But she still loves sleeping.She has ever said that sleeping have(has) been(直接用is更好) good for our health.Do you agree？
She prefers to stay at home rather than go out.She doesn’t like sports especially running.She said that she felt sick when she was running. That is the reason why she doesn’t like it.
I think she is one of the most enthusiastic and the most imaginative girls.She has a very odd thing.She can do English practice quickly.And the answer usually isn’t(换下位置) wrong.It（She） has both speed and good grades.
She is lucky,isn’t she? But the lucky(Good luck) doesn’t works always .So she would say“where luck has gone？”Sometimes she knows the answer to the question,but when she writing(writes) down the answer ,the answer isn’t (加入the one that)she wants to write.Such as she would write”head master”but she writes “hand master” So funny! Now, you would say why this Article is all about Selena.It does not the same as the title.I think you may know , Yes ,to your surprised(surprise)--I am Selena.Selena is I(me). This is my story.It’s real.My name is Selena. what do you think of me？ <终于写完了。我的美好中午啊...睡觉去了..>
